But to Paint a Universe - Prologue

[Xeeko]

Hi

It's meant to give meaning to the game, which is a puzzle game, and I find that those kinds of game usually lack a narrative sentiment to finish them. Trying to change that.

Youtube: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4MRoU1ZwKzI

Or you can view it on the game's official website: http://www.buttopaintauniverse.com/

Woudl love to hear feedback on it.

[Ernesto]

Neat video.

I find that those kinds of game usually lack a narrative sentiment to finish them

But I don't think one prologue in the beginning is going to change that.
Also: you seem to forget games like Braid or SpaceChem... There are many puzzle games with a story. And in these games the narrative is delivered one piece at a time. Not in one long prologue.

Ernesto

[Xeeko]

I absolutely agree with Braid etc, telling a story, I was thinking more of the abstract kind of puzzlers, like Bejeweled, Chime, Fractal, Lucid and others. And I'll wait and see if a prologue helps. I think it just might. I could certainly be wrong though. Thanks for your input!