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24-10-2015, 10:45 AM #1
I made a thing
Hi everyone. Inappropriate Touching here, from RTRS. I just posted this over on the breakaway RTRS forum but thought I'd get more feedback and what not from the broader community.
I've been working on a sort of 'Planetside 2 late review' and wanted some criticism before continuing in this style:
Let me know what you think!Killing threads since Quake Three...
24-10-2015, 10:31 PM #2
Two things strike me at the moment - your mic volume is maybe slightly too high, with one burst of laughter coming through pretty loud and also the mildly incongruous swearing at the start of the in-game clip at the end.
Can't comment much on the editing but seems pretty good to me.
24-10-2015, 10:50 PM #3
25-10-2015, 12:23 AM #4
I think you were overly concerned with talking clearly and slowly so as not to lose people - you can definitely make that more conversational I think. Let me know if there's anything related to After Effects that you need help with.
25-10-2015, 11:12 PM #5
Thanks for the feedback all. My friend said the VO was pretty flat as well. Not 100% sure how to make myself sound less like a bellend but I'll figure something out.Killing threads since Quake Three...